My rating: 1 of 5 stars
This was a DNF for me and my fellow bookworms. We each gave it a try and came to similar conclusions. I admire the effort that goes into creating a story and the bravery it takes to share it with strangers. Not everyone is destined to become a great author. To do so takes a great amount of effort and a willingness to accept defeat, criticism, and constructive feedback; and to apply those to your craft in order to improve. To all budding authors I offer this advice: Read, read, read, and read. The more you read the more you will be able to pick up on what works, what doesn’t, how to show instead of tell, and will improve your grasp of the English language.