I found this read to be a mixed bag. The writing has a few hitches, oddly worded phrases, misuses of words and other technical issues. The plot is interesting with only a few flow issues. I see potential for a very well done story once the writing aspect is repaired. I believe this will fix the flow and character issues as they seem to be related to the writing and not other issues. I can see this becoming a popular YA book especially with the mythological threads. I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review. This in no way influenced my opinion.