The Unholy

The UnholyThe Unholy by Paul Deblassie

My rating: 1 of 5 stars

Underneath everything there seems to be an interesting story, an idea that could become a popular novel. To get that story though, the reader has to wade through endless descriptions for everything possible, badly worded and overused phrases, and grammatical mistakes. I didn’t get a fleshed out feeling for any of the characters and found it difficult to connect to any of them. Perhaps with more experience and a rewrite this will earn better reviews and stars.

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