My rating: 2 of 5 stars
Aside from needing a through editing (Read: Remove commas) I found this one a bit too far down the far-fetched scale to be enjoyable. To verify my feelings I had a middle school child read part of the book. They agreed and did not want to continue reading the book. The characters didn’t feel believable or fleshed out. Too many strings felt abandoned in the plot, which didn’t reach any sort of conclusion.